Thursday, November 21, 2013

From My Notebook: At the Ball Game



I wrote this quite a while ago while sitting at a Twins game; I never pay attention to the actual game. More recently I wrote a longer story at another Twins game about a grounds keeper witnessing a murder in the clubhouse.

“That plane is flying awfully close.” Jim comments to his friend as they sit in the outdoor baseball stadium. 

“I’m sure there’s an airport nearby.” Collin replies. 

“I don’t know…” Jim still is uneasy. He watches as the metal plane comes closer. In an instant Jim realizes something; “Collin, we’ve got to get out of here!” Urgently he tugs at his friend, standing up. 

“What’re you talking about!?  They’re about to strike out this guy!” His friend stubbornly remains sitting. Jim looks up; the deafening roar of the plane fills the air, its metal belly descending upon them like a giant bird of prey. Other people begin to notice this as well. Jim watches in horror as an object is dropped from the plane. 

“It’s a bomb!” Several people begin screaming. Instantly the crowded stadium becomes a mad house as people trample each other, scrambling for the doors. Time slows down for Jim; he just stands there, watching helplessly as the metal object plummets towards the field. He sees people’s horrified faces; panic and fear fill the air. He can’t seem to make out what anyone is saying, the chaos melts down into ominous silence in his head. Collin is screaming something at him. Then he hears it; a high pitched whistling, coming from the bomb as it approaches the earth. Time kicks into hyper speed and Jim drops to the cement floor just as the bomb makes impact. Heat envelopes him, his vision is filled with blinding light.

Jim knew this was the end.

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